Monday, July 21, 2014

"Sunset Catcher"


Call me
'a sunset catcher'
My role is to catch sunset
before it is gone, 
eaten by the sea

Call me
'lucky'
as I am damn lucky!
able to see the view
not far from where I stay

Call me
'smiley'
As I'm grateful for everything
that make me smile
and become
who I am today

Thank you,
thank you, 
and thank you
:)

10 comments:

Flora said...

Wow nice catch and well described poem.

Overcome Life said...

Kadinche-la my dear :)

Anonymous said...

wow..what a great poem Rima...I loved the word sunset catcher.... :-)

Overcome Life said...

Thank you for reading and leaving your kind words Athira! :)

Anonymous said...

Beautiful words with beautiful view by beautiful girl!
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Overcome Life said...

Thank you for your beautiful comments Sis! :)

Anonymous said...

The most beautiful poem I have read in a long time! And you sound so convincing and determined darling. I think I will steal those lines one day!

Overcome Life said...

Thank you very much for your beautiful comments Luzee! I'm glad you loved it and please use the lines as you please :)

Unknown said...

Nice one Rima

Overcome Life said...

Thank you Tashi! Nice to see you commenting here hehehe.... :)

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