Call me
'a sunset catcher'
My role is to catch sunset
before it is gone,
eaten by the sea
Call me
'lucky'
as I am damn lucky!
able to see the view
not far from where I stay
Call me
'smiley'
As I'm grateful for everything
that make me smile
and become
who I am today
Thank you,
thank you,
and thank you
:)
Wow nice catch and well described poem.
ReplyDeleteKadinche-la my dear :)
Deletewow..what a great poem Rima...I loved the word sunset catcher.... :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you for reading and leaving your kind words Athira! :)
DeleteBeautiful words with beautiful view by beautiful girl!
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Thank you for your beautiful comments Sis! :)
DeleteThe most beautiful poem I have read in a long time! And you sound so convincing and determined darling. I think I will steal those lines one day!
ReplyDeleteThank you very much for your beautiful comments Luzee! I'm glad you loved it and please use the lines as you please :)
DeleteNice one Rima
ReplyDeleteThank you Tashi! Nice to see you commenting here hehehe.... :)
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