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| Good Bye Hope... |
It's final and I was defeated
No point arguing,
no point dreaming.
Just accept and move on.
It's not the first time,
but it'll be the last time I brought the matter up,
as it's impossible to do this alone,
the more impossible to do this with others.
It is fine.
It is OK.
We can't always have what we want.
Forget about any possibility then,
even when I'm able to.
No more hope,
no more thinking.
It's over.
Time to move on to life...
Life that I want to have...
Without it.
Simple yet an inspiring piece....loved it mam!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Tashi! :)
DeleteBut to move on living the life you want, you need hope la. You need it more than anything. Accept failure, but not defeat. What's wrong la? Don't say no more, make it some more. Don't say it's final, make it, finally i did it.
ReplyDeleteMake it some more? I wish la! ^^
DeleteBeautifully written poem. Simple and touching. Enjoyed it.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gyembo Sir! It's nice to know that you're reading my blog la! :)
DeleteDon't loose hope and your wish may come true la.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your support and encouragement Nuchu! Wish you have a wonderful weekend! :)
DeleteYou've said Good Bye which means Hope will come, but if you had said Bad Bye, then I would believe your 'No More Hope'. I ask 'HOPE' to visit you. So no worry la. Hope doing great. Do Great. Regards. Take Care. :) :) :)
ReplyDeleteHaha... I love the way you find excuse and squeeze in the bright side into my writing Ugyen! And it feels great to see your comment again here :) You too, do great and take care! :)
DeleteWhatever it is, I hope you find the strength and power to move on. I know you are one of the most positive person I've ever known.
ReplyDeleteThere're things that stagger you back and its okay sometimes. This will actually make you stronger and pursue life in a different angle.
Sending my hugs to you.
xx
Thanks dear! ;)
DeleteBagus banget puisi nya, rim heheh. Berjiwa puitis jg lu yah heheh. Jgn hilang harapan and do your best with what u have yah!
ReplyDeleteHehehe... Thank you Put! ^^
DeleteThere is no such thing as being defeated,
ReplyDeleteWhen your mind is determination-filled,
You may lose in one stance or two,
But being defeated shouldn't result to woo,
Because we can stand all over again to mover....:D
Trying to add something into your eloquently written poem. Nice Aum Rima. BTW I couldn't read your updates for quite a while now. When I couldn't go on with my blog anymore, I was at hold and almost thought of giving up. Yet as I said in above line, I might have lost, but I am not defeated. I have stood again and opened yet another blog. Thank you for remaining with me all along.
Thank you so much Sherab for your inspiring words! I appreciate it very much! That's what keep me blogging too, to connect with all my blogging friends and sharing our happiness and woes together! ^^
DeleteYeah, I've seen your new blog La and added it to my reading list. You must have hard time with the transition! Luckily you managed going through it all and I'm looking forward for your more posts to come! :)